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My True Loves
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My True Loves

Brilliance is the real LOVE Language

For the Write It Anyway writing contest:

Tell the story your voice has been trying to write… not just about writing, but what it means to you. (Genre—double Drabble—fiction.)

Note from Ginny: OMG, this was hard to write! I couldn’t decide which way to go! At first I wrote a 750-word fictionalized memoir. That got it on the page at least. Finally I decided to do the drabble but had to do a Double Drabble to get the story across. There’s no way I’m gonna win, but I needed to tell it.

Brilliance is a love language. (Ginny is talking to Nancy.)

“I keep finding people I LOVE—thoroughly.

Most are half my age. Less.

They find me. In Dubuque classroom. Book groups. Craigslist ad for roommate, now Substack!”

“Uh huh.”

“To love, methinks, is to love. Full-stop.

“Oh wait, I gotta go visit Jeff.

He’ll be waiting. Can I call you back?”

(At the visiting booth) “Hey, Coach.”

(Sits on the other side of the partition, picks up the phone ) “Hi, Kid.”

“What’ve you been writing this month?”

“I’m writin’ horror; bet you can’t believe it! Di’n’ja get, ‘Shrieking Kathy?’”

“Naw, jail mail is slow. Prob’ly in the mailroom.”

“I wanna hear what you think. What’s pourin’ from you? I saw your Gatsby article in The Inmate. Knew you’d get published before me. Stunned me then—blushed when I handed back your work. Stuns me now.

(Face flushing): “I’ve been writing poetry again. I’ll send you some.”

A buzzer sounds.

(With a grin but near tears) “See ya next month.”

“I’ll be here. Where else would I be on visitor’s day?”

He turns to go, waiting for the guard.

Jeff leaves the women’s prison as Ginny’s led back to her cell.

The End

(Epilogue): Ginny got swept up in the “Me Too” movement, was arrested for contributing to the delinquency of a minor for the Notes written in Jeff’s journal and on his papers. She pled guilty, is spending 5 years in the Iowa Women’s Correctional Facility. Jeff has since turned 18; he can now visit her in prison.

Old woman visiting man in prison, separated by a partition, talking on phone, happy faces

Song Lyrics

**Brilliance is a love language.**

“I keep finding people I LOVE—thoroughly.

Most are half my age--Less.

They find me. In a Dubuque classroom. At a ook group. In a craigslist ad for a roommate. Now Substack.”

“Uh huh.”

“To love, methinks, is to love. Full-stop.

“Oh wait, I gotta go visit Jeff.

He’ll be waiting. Can I call you back?”

“Hey, Coach.”

“Hi, Kid.”

“What’ve you been writing this month?”

“I’m writin’ horror; bet you can’t believe it. Didn’t you get, ‘Shrieking Kathy?’”

“Naw, jail mail is slow. Prob’ly in the mailroom.”

“I wanna hear what you think.

What’s pourin’ from you?

I saw your Gatsby article in The Inmate.

Knew you’d get published before me.

You stunned me then—

blushed when I handed back your work.

You stun me now.

“I’ve been writing poetry again. I’ll send you some.”

A buzzer sounds.

**With a grin but near tears**

“See ya next month.”

“I’ll be here.

Where else would I be on visitor’s day?”

He turns to go, waiting for the guard.

Jeff leaves the women’s prison as Ginny is led back to her cell.

**Swept up in the Epstein scandal, she.

Was arrested and pled guilty for

adding to corruption of a minor, yeah

She’s doing time, she

Five years in a women’s prison, No

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